



The latest version of my Animatic, which was shown at the first rush on Wednesday 3rd of Dec.
Basically the same as the previous version but it now contains more sound effects and backgrounds. I have added a shot where the umbrella falls to the ground when dropped by the mother, and also adjusted the scene where mother and child are reunited. Although it works as an animatic in that it tells the story, I still feel the reuniting scene isn't quite correct. The most important part of the story is when the mother realises the importance of the doll and although I've started to portray this in the animatic I think there is another shot needed. This shot will probably be of the Mother watching the child be reunited with her doll. The current shots in that scene also need to be closer to the characters, so that the viewer feels the intimacy of the moment.
This version of the animatic has place holders for sound track and effects and also dialouge.
The dialogue is just me recorded at uni and most of the sound FX came from the uni libirary collection. The sound track is mostly two tracks from Yann Tiersen, Mothers Journey and La Terrase. But the two tracks at the end is the start of two Yael Naim's songs, Lonely and Far Far.
I'm am now working on adding a few more camera moves (done in After effects) and drawing in the missing backgrounds. Will hopefully show this new version in the rushes next wed.


I have been playing around with brown paper for a while now, these three sketches I did drew using pencil, chalk and charcol and the middle one has some water colour pencil too.



I much prefere the use of watercolour in the painting below, an image I just stumbled apon on google. It is softer and more fluid. This also has a similar colour pallet to the one I think I will use for my film.


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